– 8-sentence snippet from Night’s Treasure –
“Everything in your life I’ve given you and now that I ask for one thing in return, you refuse to help. You pay back my kindness with ingratitude. Does filial loyalty mean nothing to you?”
There was a weight crushing her, wrapping around her chest till she couldn’t breathe. His eyes bored into her and she felt sweat begin to prickle on her forehead as she fought to remain standing. The strain was too much though and she fell to her knees with a gasp.
– The End –
Hope you enjoyed my 4th 8 sentence snippet from my manuscript Night’s Treasure!
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In other news, I’ve started writing the sequel to Night’s Treasure. For the moment I’m sticking with NT2 for the working title. It’ll change in the future, probably the distant future when I’m nearer to at least the middle if not the end because NT2 is really easy to type and I’m in no hurry to change it.
Yay for writing again!
When do you decide on a story’s title?